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A Thin Veil

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Ink and alcohol with graphite on watercolour paper
please feel free to share - all the best - Carne

more images on my blog [link]
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Image size
1000x1440px 1.13 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/128 second
Aperture
F/7.1
Focal Length
20 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 21, 2013, 12:43:49 PM
Sensor Size
5mm
© 2013 - 2024 Carnegriff
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

You really have a fantastic style going here. I say that knowing that an artist should go wherever their interests take them, so I won't say 'stick with this', but I will say that is it beautiful and stunning. Looking at it close up, I almost feel like I'm looking at topography or a city scape inside the face portion, it's so detailed, and chaotic and just overall gorgeous.

The one and only critique I have is that the angle of the eyes compared to the nose and mouth seems a bit off. The nose and mouth seems more like it's facing more towards the left, while the eyes seem straight on but looking towards the left.

The last thing isn't a critique as much as a challenge- I see a lot of your latest work is a lot of portraiture, when you really have done a lot of beautiful full body work as well. I want to challenge you to do some more full body artwork, perhaps with more than one figure.

Thanks for listening, and good luck! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>