You should be displaying at a higher resolution. I understand that you probably did this in a size that a scanner does not work for, but still, it would be nice.
Your anatomy is off, almost as if the lower half of the face has been pushed forward, and the eyes widened. i think every thing else fits style and works... though the lower right quadrant gets a little lost along the way.
Cheers - the pic is taken at an angle! it's just a phone snap of a wip.. maybe that's why you think the anatomy is out - Don't know what you mean by 'the lower right quadrant gets a little lost along the way'