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Mar 11, 2012, 7:38:21 PM
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Eden Photoshoot 1 by Carnegriff Eden Photoshoot 1 by Carnegriff
Artwork by Carne Griffiths - Ink and Tea on paper [link]
Plants from The Stone Space
On the set of the photo shoot with Photographer Arta Kane
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:iconnakamasosaku:
First: great

This image has all the right ingredients. The only thing that doesn't feel right is the way things are arranged. Currently it looks a bit messy. It appears as if the main reason for this is the arrangement of the plants and the model. There is a nice flow in the drawing moving from right to left into the depth. The plants in front are arranged poorly. They should follow the the flow of the painting. Right now you can see a part of the floor between the plants in front. This takes away the attention of the plants.

A thing might be to have the plants arranged from large to small both horizontally as into depth. This will free up the left side and have the (gorgeous) model stand out more without her overruling the drawing (she could be positioned more on the left). Both the drawing and the plants will also have more synergy. Another idea might be to have the model (sit) on the floor. Which will probably suite the whole arrangement better (form large to small) and leave the drawing in full sight.

Last thing: great!
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:iconcarnegriff:
Carnegriff Sep 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you
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:iconeliontoast:
An unusual introduction of reality to your whimsical style.
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Carnegriff Mar 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks - does it work?
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HibiscoPurpurea Mar 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
She looks like a maniqui, she scares me. I love it, I can't wait for see it finish! I love the photo its a beautiful garden, or well, good selection of plants n.n
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Carnegriff Mar 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks - going to share the shoot soon
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:iconrestlesssands:
if you made wallpaper, i'd buy it... unless, do you?
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:iconcarnegriff:
Carnegriff Mar 18, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I make it but on the walls!
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:iconrestlesssands:
well then, i will wrap up your walls, just watch, i will, i'll wrap up your walls :handshake:
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Flarimar Mar 15, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome!!
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