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In Progress by Carnegriff In Progress by Carnegriff
Ink tea whiskey graphite....
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My eyes are drawn from the bottom right up toward the top left of the painting, like a diagonal line from right to left. My sight sort of stops at the top left, but then, as if by magnetic selection, my sight is forced back to the bottom right corner to confront the darker shades there. If the subject matter is the face, I would add a few (Just a few) darker shades around the eye lines (pushing back the shadows in the eye sockets by the nose), around the mouth (inside the surface of the lips), to keep my gaze (the audiences gaze) on the face and not on the corners. (the image seems bottom right corner heavy. balance tones on top and bottom of painting to correct).

This is just my personal opinion. I am not the artist.
Really, you are almost there. The entire painting is captivating.
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SJNVT Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Superb! I wish I could utilize color like this!
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gokhanproject Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
EXCELLENT WORK.
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gensanity Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
beautiful work
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N0W41T Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
nice colors:)
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MentalAsylumRules Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow it's turning out great!
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etiera21 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's good,
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supercli Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
nice
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