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Ink Graphite Tea and Acrylic Gouache on Bockingford 535 gsm Watercolour Paper 70 x 50cm
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is my first Critique, but I just had to write it about this piece of art.


First, let's assume it's a woman. When I see this woman keeping her head up sky high and neck neck stretched, I can hear her word in my mind: "I'm proud who I am, I am not afraid of you and nether can you change that!". This is what I see in this work and I like it.

It is undoubtedly very original work of art with an original mix of various techniques. The scaling of misc details is fascinating, with these, your mind creates associations between art and reality, so it's basically abstract and concrete art directions in one. Also, I think that its wonderful that you can create something like this using only the basic colors that these techniques provide you with.

Just for me, I think you needed to ease up on the blue just for the one side of the painting, maybe by her neck at the right side, because it a little bit too blue on the painting and it's not getting enough light color contrast, only from the sides of the painting.

Hope this can help you build up your confidence and good luck in your future works!