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Mindscapes #1

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Sometimes you just have to abandon all the figurative elements and just enjoy the act of drawing, this series explores the journey taken
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Image size
3231x2284px 2.03 MB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 4S
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Sep 13, 2012 8:39:35 PM +01:00
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I am one of your secret admirer and thus, looking up so much to you and your work paired with my not so great experience in art, I do not know if my critique will be of any help.
Nevertheless the originality of this work, abstract as compared to your mostly figurative/representational painting, appeals my eyes and emotion. What I like the most is the movement, almost like melodious flow from right to upper left of the paper. I also love the ghostly strikingly light white on the left and of course, the glass shards.
It is, in my humble opinion, a bit too clustered and busy to let me ponder at certain vocal points. I wished you had put more darker tones on at least three points where the drips are cummulated (lower left blue-ish point, very dark blue point right abouve it and the dark crimson point on the its right). It might enhanced the golden colors as well.
All in all, amazing art as usual!