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The Miracle

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nice to be back
Image size
2448x3264px 2.32 MB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 4S
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Nov 16, 2012 11:43:12 AM +00:00
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is an excellent drawing but the composition feels very static. I would like to see a background or even a frame to give the face some sort of context. Another option would be to try cropping it in different ways. For instance, if you were to zoom in close enough to crop the top of the head, that would place much greater emphasis on the eyes. Similarly, cropping the right side of the page would make one wonder what she is looking at. I like your choice of colors here. They add variety to the piece without distracting from the line work.