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December 13, 2012
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4.8 MB
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Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 4S
Shutter Speed
1/120 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 13, 2012 12:08:36 PM +00:00
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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White Noise.. by Carnegriff White Noise.. by Carnegriff
a work in progress
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:iconartistamandarose:
I am drawn to this portrait because of the odd angle of the girl and her gaze. The composition is sound, with a diagonal line moving the eye through the artwork. I love the sparse use of color in general, and how the piece uses complimentary colors well without being tacky. I understand this is a work in progress, the colors are starting to come alive though I do wonder how the title connects to the subject or helps the viewer explore the piece if there is much more color to be added.

Style aside this drawing is technically sound, there are no mistakes in proportion and the flowers are lovely.

Overall I would say this piece if coming along nicely, however it just does not grab me and pull me in like some of the other work I've seen from this artist.
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Alfjr Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
wooooooow love it
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it looks absolutely promising because I love it already! :D
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BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful work... send you a request of my group :iconsoulcollectors:
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rijahafizie19 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hai, what paper and material is it ? :-)
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kaiosart Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome! Doesn't look like a WIP. Who is the girl in the picture?
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