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December 13, 2012
4.8 MB
2448×3264
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4 mm
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Dec 13, 2012, 12:08:36 PM
Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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:iconartistamandarose:
I am drawn to this portrait because of the odd angle of the girl and her gaze. The composition is sound, with a diagonal line moving the eye through the artwork. I love the sparse use of color in general, and how the piece uses complimentary colors well without being tacky. I understand this is a work in progress, the colors are starting to come alive though I do wonder how the title connects to the subject or helps the viewer explore the piece if there is much more color to be added.

Style aside this drawing is technically sound, there are no mistakes in proportion and the flowers are lovely.

Overall I would say this piece if coming along nicely, however it just does not grab me and pull me in like some of the other work I've seen from this artist.
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:iconalfjr:
wooooooow love it
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~BellaGBear Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it looks absolutely promising because I love it already! :D
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=BiBiARTs Dec 13, 2012   Digital Artist
wonderful work... send you a request of my group :iconsoulcollectors:
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~rijahafizie19 Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hai, what paper and material is it ? :-)
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~kaiosart Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome! Doesn't look like a WIP. Who is the girl in the picture?
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