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wing assignment sketch

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Wing assignment sketch of work in progress, with real magpie wings (to use for next stage reference) - being created for the wing assignment

plus here's a youtube vid of some drawing - finally succumbed!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I love the composition that you in this piece a lot. I have seen in a lot of your past pieces that you centralize the figure but you have off centered her here. That really keeps my eyes circling around in all of the negative space. I love the wings however they are a little overwhelming. I can't seem to enjoy the beautiful mark making and shading that you have in the figure because my eyes keep on getting drawn away into the dark colors of the wings. I am hoping that you will be able to work some color into the figure or at least push the values so that the figure can be a little bit more of a focus because how you have brought this figure to be is just wonderful. I really enjoy this piece a lot. Thank you for sharing it with us here on Deviant art.