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July 17, 2012
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Jul 17, 2012 5:21:03 PM +01:00
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work in progress - from the studio by Carnegriff work in progress - from the studio by Carnegriff
Ink and green tea on paper
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All in all, a wonderful piece. The left pupil and iris appear to be facing outwards (the darkening in the corner), so adjustments could be made to keep a line of vision continuous for both eyes. Your inking skills appear very refined, gradation and stroke both work fluidly. Distribution of tones is slightly spotty, the viewer's eye is immediately drawn to right eye, then down to left side of chin. Scattering darker tones though the piece might add more balance throughout. Great use of both positive and negative space, color ranges, etc. Very fantastic job, and keep up the great work.
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RJHalfbreed Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ohhhh my goodness, this is beautiful! 
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SuperAstral Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Really love your work 
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ieatb3ars Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
To be honest, I like this more here than in its completed form. I guess I like the softer and simpler tones.
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Lechosness Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
both tender and agressive, love such techniqye
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melissathepainter Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
I absolutely love this!
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Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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frosty456 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student General Artist
this is amazingly beautiful, I love all your work - I'm about to do fine art at university, have you got any tips you would be willing to share???
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Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Tips... I struggled for all of first year at Unversity.. trying to make things work.. then I forgot about it and just tried to read and find out about as many artists that inspired me across all backgrounds.. I ended up being very inspired by the work of animators the brothers quay.. that lead to svankmajer, calligraphy, music, kafka, surrealism, automatic drawing, existentialism, outsider art, Henry darger, antonin artaud, joel peter witkin, marquis de sade... and I draw a lot too.. ocd ..
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frosty456 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks a lot - this is really helpful :) thanks for considering the landscape idea as well :)
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Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
no problems.. I've seen a few artists creating beautiful decayed landscapes at the moment .. very inspiring
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