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July 17, 2012
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Apple
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iPhone 4S
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
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4 mm
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Jul 17, 2012 5:21:03 PM +01:00
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work in progress - from the studio by Carnegriff work in progress - from the studio by Carnegriff
Ink and green tea on paper
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All in all, a wonderful piece. The left pupil and iris appear to be facing outwards (the darkening in the corner), so adjustments could be made to keep a line of vision continuous for both eyes. Your inking skills appear very refined, gradation and stroke both work fluidly. Distribution of tones is slightly spotty, the viewer's eye is immediately drawn to right eye, then down to left side of chin. Scattering darker tones though the piece might add more balance throughout. Great use of both positive and negative space, color ranges, etc. Very fantastic job, and keep up the great work.
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AudrajScraps Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Love it all, fabulous piece of art
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:iconcarnegriff:
Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you
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RJHalfbreed Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohhhh my goodness, this is beautiful! 
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:iconcarnegriff:
Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much
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SuperAstral Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Really love your work 
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:iconcarnegriff:
Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks
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ieatb3ars Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
To be honest, I like this more here than in its completed form. I guess I like the softer and simpler tones.
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Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
so often the simplicity is stronger
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Lechosness Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
both tender and agressive, love such techniqye
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Carnegriff Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you
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