Luciana - a work in progress

This piece is amazing I love the effect the pencil you are using gives. I like how on one side the eye is very detailed and clear while the other is less clear and less defined. It looks like she was looking into a mirror and it broke and the lines are all the shattered glass. I like the fact that you did not give her an outline meaning you did not include her hair and neck in the drawing. The technique you used making her face so rough yet it looks smooth is amazing. Overall I really like the drawing I think it is amazing.